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		<title>Comment on Don&#8217;t Let These Problems Ruin Your Screenplay by stephan</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/dont-let-these-problems-ruin-your-screenplay#comment-897</link>
		<dc:creator>stephan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 15:17:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hello

Super advice.  My question is once again with the word &quot;is&quot;.  I have been told to use active vs. passive words regarding the word &quot;is&quot;.  Example:  in a scene there are several people are in a car and i want to put their positions in the car.  Normally when writing (not a script) I would write something like &quot;John is driving, Betty is sitting in the passenger seat and George is sitting in the back seat.&quot;

According to advise from others I have been told to avoid the word &quot;is&quot; in a situation like this. So the above, in screenplay mode, would be written like &quot;John drives, Betty sits in the passenger seat and George sits in the back seat&quot;?

That sounds rather artificial to me, but does it really matter?  Is the second example that avoids the word &quot;is&quot; correct in usage in a screenplay?

Many thanks... stephan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hello</p>
<p>Super advice.  My question is once again with the word "is".  I have been told to use active vs. passive words regarding the word "is".  Example:  in a scene there are several people are in a car and i want to put their positions in the car.  Normally when writing (not a script) I would write something like "John is driving, Betty is sitting in the passenger seat and George is sitting in the back seat."</p>
<p>According to advise from others I have been told to avoid the word "is" in a situation like this. So the above, in screenplay mode, would be written like "John drives, Betty sits in the passenger seat and George sits in the back seat"?</p>
<p>That sounds rather artificial to me, but does it really matter?  Is the second example that avoids the word "is" correct in usage in a screenplay?</p>
<p>Many thanks... stephan</p>
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		<title>Comment on Don&#8217;t Let These Problems Ruin Your Screenplay by Rakesh</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/dont-let-these-problems-ruin-your-screenplay#comment-63</link>
		<dc:creator>Rakesh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2012 18:28:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Kris,

I am a first time writer. I use celtx2.9.7 , it always includes the space of (Continued) at the top and bottom of the page even when I disable the option. Is there any option of manual tweaking and using the unconsumed space or else it&#039;s making a difference of 20 pages in my script

My question is: How I utilize the unconsumed space by eliminating the &#039;continued&#039; nuisance.
Regards
Rakesh</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Kris,</p>
<p>I am a first time writer. I use celtx2.9.7 , it always includes the space of (Continued) at the top and bottom of the page even when I disable the option. Is there any option of manual tweaking and using the unconsumed space or else it's making a difference of 20 pages in my script</p>
<p>My question is: How I utilize the unconsumed space by eliminating the 'continued' nuisance.<br />
Regards<br />
Rakesh</p>
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		<title>Comment on First-person vs Third-person point of view by kent krogman</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/first-person-vs-third-person-point-of-view#comment-97</link>
		<dc:creator>kent krogman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Apr 2012 03:57:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>really enjoyed reading this.  thank you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>really enjoyed reading this.  thank you.</p>
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		<title>Comment on First-person vs Third-person point of view by Renee Chastain</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/first-person-vs-third-person-point-of-view#comment-96</link>
		<dc:creator>Renee Chastain</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Apr 2012 23:27:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This really helped me a lot, so thank you.  I have been toying with several different ideas for how to narrate a novel I am planning to write, and this helped me to decide that 3rd person limited is best.

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This really helped me a lot, so thank you.  I have been toying with several different ideas for how to narrate a novel I am planning to write, and this helped me to decide that 3rd person limited is best.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Don&#8217;t Let These Problems Ruin Your Screenplay by Ross</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/dont-let-these-problems-ruin-your-screenplay#comment-62</link>
		<dc:creator>Ross</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 14:45:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Kris,

Great blog - really is. I have a few questions I&#039;d appreciate your thoughts on if possible.

I have a script in which there is a lot of sign language. I&#039;m trying to keep it from disrupting the flow and am trying to think how best to represent it on film. There are two types of characters who use it, one is a person with no hearing-impairment who can sign, he therefore signs and speaks at the same time, which is fine I think. For people who are totally hearing-impaired, I have resorted to subtitles. Is this ok? 

I realise this is probably not a common problem! But your thoughts would be welcome on this. I the same script I also have some foreign language, and I have treated both situations by pre-formatting character speech in parentheses with (in Chinese, with subtitles) or (in Sign Language, with subtitles) is this correct?


In another script, an animation, the first scene is supposed to feel like the camera is investigating a scene, looking at certain things and acting in a certain way - in this case, as its an animation, is it ok to use thing like &#039;camera pauses as if to investigate&#039; or &#039;camera glances left, then right, spots the trail and follows&#039; as it is trying to give the movements of the camera a personality almost?


More basic question. What kind of characters should be capitalized when they first appear in action? Only characters who appear again later or all characters?

I realise these are quite random questions, but the help on this blog is great, so any thoughts would be fantastic.

Thanks
Ross</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Kris,</p>
<p>Great blog - really is. I have a few questions I'd appreciate your thoughts on if possible.</p>
<p>I have a script in which there is a lot of sign language. I'm trying to keep it from disrupting the flow and am trying to think how best to represent it on film. There are two types of characters who use it, one is a person with no hearing-impairment who can sign, he therefore signs and speaks at the same time, which is fine I think. For people who are totally hearing-impaired, I have resorted to subtitles. Is this ok? </p>
<p>I realise this is probably not a common problem! But your thoughts would be welcome on this. I the same script I also have some foreign language, and I have treated both situations by pre-formatting character speech in parentheses with (in Chinese, with subtitles) or (in Sign Language, with subtitles) is this correct?</p>
<p>In another script, an animation, the first scene is supposed to feel like the camera is investigating a scene, looking at certain things and acting in a certain way - in this case, as its an animation, is it ok to use thing like 'camera pauses as if to investigate' or 'camera glances left, then right, spots the trail and follows' as it is trying to give the movements of the camera a personality almost?</p>
<p>More basic question. What kind of characters should be capitalized when they first appear in action? Only characters who appear again later or all characters?</p>
<p>I realise these are quite random questions, but the help on this blog is great, so any thoughts would be fantastic.</p>
<p>Thanks<br />
Ross</p>
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		<title>Comment on Don&#8217;t Let These Problems Ruin Your Screenplay by Jeff</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/dont-let-these-problems-ruin-your-screenplay#comment-61</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2012 01:49:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kris:

When a book title is mentioned in a screenplay, either in action or dialogue, should it be in quotation marks, underlines, or some other form?

Thanks

Jeff</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kris:</p>
<p>When a book title is mentioned in a screenplay, either in action or dialogue, should it be in quotation marks, underlines, or some other form?</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>Jeff</p>
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		<title>Comment on Flawed Characters and Why We Love Them by Conference Challenge #5: Grip, Click, LEAP! &#171; As the Eraser Burns</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/flawed-characters-and-why-we-love-them#comment-15</link>
		<dc:creator>Conference Challenge #5: Grip, Click, LEAP! &#171; As the Eraser Burns</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Feb 2012 20:12:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] So was Kris Cramer&#8217;s article on Flawed Characters and Why We Love Them. [...] </description>
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		<title>Comment on Don&#8217;t Let These Problems Ruin Your Screenplay by Gerard Gogarty</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2009/dont-let-these-problems-ruin-your-screenplay#comment-58</link>
		<dc:creator>Gerard Gogarty</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Dec 2011 02:16:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fantastic blog, really cuts to the point. Some sites are so entrenched in the use of CONTINUED, CUT TO, SOUNDS it&#039;s hard to get any clear information. This blog really clears my mind. Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic blog, really cuts to the point. Some sites are so entrenched in the use of CONTINUED, CUT TO, SOUNDS it's hard to get any clear information. This blog really clears my mind. Thanks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Kiss Writer&#8217;s Block Goodbye by akito93</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2008/kiss-writers-block-goodbye#comment-69</link>
		<dc:creator>akito93</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Dec 2011 23:40:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am writing a story estimated at over 30000 words atleast. I have most of the scenes done, except the orientation. It&#039;s like an essay for me, the hardest part is the introduction, and after that&#039;s done im fine.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am writing a story estimated at over 30000 words atleast. I have most of the scenes done, except the orientation. It's like an essay for me, the hardest part is the introduction, and after that's done im fine.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Inspiration for writers by Mick</title>
		<link>http://www.kriscramer.com/2011/inspiration-for-writers#comment-132</link>
		<dc:creator>Mick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 03:40:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That was inspiring. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That was inspiring. :)</p>
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